Today,
I talk about my achievement memorial day. On February 28, I climbed up 3,333
stairs with my two friends in Uto. When we finished examination and passed the
university, we have promised to climb the stairs since before. The entrance
examination results had not yet come, but we were not able to wait it, so we decided
to climb the stairs. On that day, after having eaten lunch in the house of my
friend, we started to climb the stairs. At first, we were not so severe, but we
came to have a pain in the foot and came to feel it to be very hard since we
climbed 1,000 steps. Therefore, I have begun to sing songs to light an
atmosphere. Then my friends began to sing too, and we recovered split again, so
we took fresh heart and have begun to climb it again. While going up the
stairs, we met a master of the stairs up. He is good at climbing the stairs
because he climbs the stairs three times every day. We had him teach a hang of
the stairs up. He said to us, “ When you climb the stairs, you must not turn to
the bottom. You look at only the front.” We were impressed by the words very
much. Thanks to the words, finally, we were able to finish going up 3,333
stairs! We attained our objective. At the same time, we finally finished a long
fight of an university entrance examination, and we felt that stepped forward
to the new first step. Afterwards we went to the temple called the Syakain at
the top of the stairs. We prayed for each wish there. Then we finished the day
of the challenging. It is my achievement memorial day on that day.
Ryueiso certainly has a fascinating menu! I can understand why you and your family enjoy it so much. Thanks for all the detail you wrote, including the way things are cooked. Be careful of a few things, though*
ReplyDelete1) fry <> fly
2) what kind of event is "tray"?
3) I think Hachimori is a *platter* which many *dishes* are place upon. Right?
Journal C = 280+ words =7APs!!!
Akino, this is such a great story about the 3,333 stairs. It's too bad that you wrote about the same story for **Paragraph 3**! I told everyone in class NOT to do that! -3 APs.
Journal D = 280+ words =7-3 = 4 APs